I love going to a zoo. It is very fun to look at animals and have a lunch there. I agree with the topic statement and I can substantiate that using two points.
First, let me consider about living conditions. I think animals in zoos are very happy. They do not need to find food. Also when ⇦このあたり、あまり記憶が… they get sick, they are taken care of by immediately.⇦zookeepersと言う単語が思いつかず、byの後ろを空欄にしてしまいました。
Second, let me think about endangered species. I have heard that wild animals are struggling to find food, so ⇦たぶんこう書いた、they might assault people. I think that it is a good idea to commit animals like them to professionals. That is why I agree that keeping animals in zoos is good.
I agree with the idea that Japan should protect more historic sites due to tourism and education.
First, Japanese historic sites should be protected. Every year, many foreigners visit Japan. As the Olympics is scheduled to be held in 2020, the number of visitors to Japan will be on the rise. In terms of economic growth, Japanese historic sites should be protected.Second, Japanese historic sites give opportunities of educating children to learn Japanese history. If it were part of カリキュラム、⇦スペルミス they could learn more Japanese history? Therefore, it is important to protect Japanese historic sites.