Students from poor families can’t buy such expensive clothes.
以上の3センテンスをつなげて見てみましょう。
School uniforms are too expensive. For example, a set of uniforms of a private school is about 100,000 yen. Students from poor families can’t buy such expensive clothes. (28語）
最初の理由が完成しました。28語あるので、十分な長さになりました。内容も具体的で分かりやすいです。
ここまでで、10分経過しました。
理由２を、＜②＞部分に書く（9分）
では、同じ要領で理由２もも書きましょう。
2つめの理由は「制服はカッコ悪い」にしましょう。ここではnot fashionableとします。
School uniforms are not fashionable.
次に具体例です。色は黒っぽく、デザインが古臭いと説明します。
The colors of uniforms are usually too dark and the designs are too traditional.
最後にまとめです。「若い生徒たちは、そんな古臭い服を着るのは幸せじゃない」としました。
Young students are not happy to wear such old-fashioned clothes.
つなげて見てみましょう。
School uniforms are not fashionable. The colors of uniforms are usually too dark and the designs are too traditional. Young students are not happy to wear such old-fashioned clothes.(29語)
では、最初から全部つなげて見てみましょう。
全体の見直し（1分）
I don’t think students should wear school uniforms. I have two reasons why I think so.
First, School uniforms are too expensive. For example, a set of uniforms of a private school is about 100,000 yen. Students from poor families can’t buy such expensive clothes.
Second, School uniforms are not fashionable. The colors of uniforms are usually too dark and the designs are too traditional. Young students are not happy to wear such old-fashioned clothes.
For these reasons, I don’t think student should wear school uniforms. (86語）
